“(unknown current hero — generic email-marketing-vendor pattern)”
The hero names the category ("email marketing and automation") but not the result. A small business owner evaluating Mailchimp vs. ActiveCampaign vs. Brevo has no reason to choose this page over the next tab.
“Turn first-time buyers into repeat customers — with emails that send themselves.”
Names the outcome (repeat customers), the audience (businesses selling to buyers), and the mechanism (automated emails) in one sentence. The visitor can repeat this to their cofounder.