1. Rewrite the headline to make a promise
Replace category labels ("The marketing platform for teams") with a specific promise about what changes for the visitor ("Send invoices in 20 seconds, not 3 hours"). The headline is the single most-read element on the page. If it fails, everything below it is invisible. Test your headline with the four-second rule: can a stranger say what this is, who it is for, and why it matters — in four seconds?