“(unknown current hero -- generic fintech pattern)”
The hero names the category ("financial data network" or similar infrastructure framing) but never names the business result. A product lead evaluating Plaid vs. MX needs to know: does this reduce integration time? Increase connection success rates? Lower fraud?
“Connect your users' bank accounts in a single API call -- 12,000+ institutions, 99.9% uptime.”
Names the action (connect bank accounts), the simplicity (single API call), the coverage (12,000+ institutions), and the reliability (99.9% uptime). Four buying criteria in one line.