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The savings claim lacks anchoring. "Save X%" without a baseline (company size, spend volume, or time period) triggers skepticism rather than excitement. Finance leaders are trained to distrust unanchored percentages.
“Companies with 100+ employees save an average of $175K/year on software and travel spend with Ramp.”
Anchors the claim to a company size (100+), a dollar figure ($175K), a timeframe (year), and spend categories (software and travel). The claim is now falsifiable, which makes it credible.